Group 4 Demetri's J. newsletter " Then and Now " and well in first place their were some spelling errors and he needed to check his grammar. And his pictures wouldn't that really good only the first one that looks like a old game system. He had three columns , but they looked like if they were looking all together in the top of the pictures. He had three pictures, but I think next time he could of got more better pictures to put on this newsletter. I think he had his newsletter in consistent but this pictures and his text were a little bit bad like this were in different places. Plus, I think he could of work a little bit more and change his background also.
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