Group 10 Paul's M. newsletter " The Blues " and in first place it looked good with interesting stories, and he could of check his grammar. He didn't had pictures only one picture of a hawk of the internet that he made it big and it didn't good with it. He had two columns in the left side of the newsletter, one one title, and there is no page. It looks plan like I think he should of put a background so it wouldn't looked that empty. As well it looked consistent and he could of worked a little bit more and change some things so it can looked well organized.
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